Brilliant story telling
As a kite flyer from my youth, I could net help be captivated by the work that was put into this piece. No, one can complain that you wasted their time with such a beautifully playful piece. I loved the use of light and the texture of the kite.
One note, at least from my experience with kites they won't fly if they are full of holes. On the other hand, I could believe you actually played with paper or studied its movement before you did this since it looks exceptionally realistic.
Thanks for the short and I hope to see many more!
TonioMiguel