Needs to feel more real
C'mon scuttling across a building a jumping that just does not work in reality. He needs to get a good running start. It just seemed as if he would have fallen to his doom rather than made it across. Its kind of sad since I can see you put so rather genuine effort.
Word play at its prime
This piece was really impressive. I loved the use of words as animate objects. The helicopter was really cool.
Did you do that by symbols in flash or with an action script?
Come on finish it.
Wow,
I could tell this is going to work out just by looking at your style. You were able to create a strong erie mood with both music and scary tree montage. I liked how the author was huddled in is seat and I felt the growing room worked well.
Overall strong power of cinematography and style. You should finish this first before teasing us.
Who cannot love a Superman rip-off!
Yes, this has a feeling of originality and shorts of parody fun. Can't wait to see what's being dished out.
the preview was a little rushed i gotta admit, but ill focus and toil on the series
Sloooowww down the signs
If you want it to work right slow it down. It was way to fast for me to be able to read them and get the joke. Some of your signs flashed way too fast too. Please redo this correctly...Oh you better find the sign from Falmouth Maine....Golfer Crossing (Hunting with a shot gun only). It may be hard to find but worth putting on your flash.
yes a lot of people are saying the signs go too fast... i will fix eventually,
look out for extended version! and thanks for ur review!
Don't don't...OMG don't!
I loved this characters antics and blatant disregard for safety. He reminds me of don't try this at home kids type personality or Good Idea Bad Idea. I think a great deal of time and effort was spent on this too.
Please shower us with more Twinkletoes shorts Ben!
This is when flash becomes an art form!
You really turned this flash into a masterpiece. I could see you putting together some really nice artistic scenes. All you need to do is work on the story telling element and your pieces will soar to a whole new level.
Thanks for the inspiring flash!
Just one of those days
Man if that does not feel sometimes like my life or what. I have to say you had me in stitches more than 75% of that video. The death montage was brilliant.
Your cinematography was crisp and had no loop holes. I loved it how the song really had a strong influence on this piece. I bet band that wrote this would love to host this on their site. Long live Ska!
Randomness can be funny this is the proof!
I have to say you know how to keep me laughing. I think this comedy kicks steve McFarlen's family guy in the teeth. Truthfully you have a gift at making random stuff work together and keeping it funny.
Please continue to confuse us into puddles of laughter!
No complaints here
I have to say you show the makings of a well advance anime artist. So your style mimics the Rave Master so what. Believe it or not most animators start by copying someone elses style to gain experience manipulating the medium. I use some of muybridges locamotions to learn how the human body works and people have been copying michaelangelo and da vinnci for years (some even making money off their works).
Your style seems well controlled and reminscent of a fantastic anime show opening. Be proud of yourself for working so hard. You certainly deserve it!
I have a great deal of experiance with video, animation and am a software engineer by hobby. I also have helped 6th graders in an after school program make a 20 minute short and their own animations using Appleworks.
Age 44, Male
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Harney Middle School
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