TonioMiguel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Girl Sunshine]

Cute but not fully functional

You need to learn action script to make this work best and not put code on the items but in the action layer. This is cute but the problem is this is not a fully functional sunshine. The trick is that when click anywhere on the screen the sunshine is connected. Instead you do grab it but it is not centered. Make sure each of your movie clips are center on their orientation this you choose when you turn your graphic into a symbol.

sunshine-fan responds:

Thanks, i'll try :)

[Bbq-ish evening at bar]

Clear consistent hilarious humor

I have to say since you started these black and white pieces I have been incredibly impressed and laughing in stitches. This clearly is a comic piece of genius.

Question: Are you supposed to be the only one doing these or is this crew production because if all others are substitutes only yours should be making it through the portal?

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Im sharing this "BBQ-KIT" at clockcrew,which gives you the vital charachters to make your own bbq movies and people are making those.

Its not some bbq-crew or anything.

Thanks for review.

[Grundy needs to look!]

Movie's elements rate well overall remains undone

I liked your intros but you gave me no plot or story to enjoy. The last scene I was waiting for little miss bouncy to blow piros head off. You disappointed me greatly by cutting off your movie to short. I only gave you 2/5 because you sapply cut off a great movie. If you want to make a good continuing series be sure to finish it on a good note. It would have been better if you had finished with pyros intro rather than moving into the plot.

[Dr Steel's Fibonacci Seq]

All this over the procreation of rabbits

This piece was both fun and entertaining. It always makes me laugh when I see people use Fibonacci's number which is the formula to find out after a certain time period how many offspring will a set of 2 rabbits have. This includes their offspring having rabbits too.

I loved your play on cut and paste it offered a nice effect. This is truly a piece of comic genius.

starkravenmadd responds:

Actually it is not just about rabbits. Fibonacci just used rabbits as an example of the exponentiality of the numbers. In fact I was going to use robotic bunnies to illistrate this point but had to scrap the idea at the last minute. Thanks for the view!

[Takabus]

Fix the rating pronto

Hey, I will admit your artwork is prime but don't be an idiot and rate this suitable for all audiences. This is a mature piece. The F-bomb is readily used in the first piece. There is also a high quantity of adult situations.

The plot seems almost vacant but your animation is really smooth and runs well. Fix the rating because you are just not being fair to our younger users.

Mouflon responds:

Oh yes you're right. Thanks for pointing that out. I forgot to change them back after my first try of uploading this failed. Thanks for the review

[fightinPractice]

Smooth FBF sketches

Let's turn those sketches into drawings. This should be simple as to I can see you already demonstrate limitless potential. I think you could be as good as the Yu Yu if you put your 110% into it.

You know how to animate sketches challenge yourself to finish this. It is cool but I know you could make this better!

[Uncle Sam on the River]

Good, blunt and to the point

I wish Flash was around during the Clinton Administration too. Clinton is believed to have sold nuclear secrets to China and Hilary may have bumped off a fellow lawyer during White Water.

Sorry to say but in Florida the government may have lost interest in the votes but the state did not. George W. Bush did win 2000 just like Kennedy by the Electoral College. If you have a problem with it, maybe we should get rid of a system that was only needed because otherwise it would have took 4 years after an election to know who won.

I am not a big fan of Bush but start listening to real news and not the washed up media. Americas media whether FOX News or CBS or NBC, or ABC are all corrupt just as much as the president if not more. Freedom of the press is controlled by big wigs more powerful than the President how else did nobody know English as the official language was up for grabs and passed because nobody was made aware.

Stop blamming the President and start blamming ourselves. Especially those who throw away their votes every election by not voting and complain. Nough said.

[Altered Reality]

Makes you double check scientists of AI

Truthfully, if machines could think would they destroy perhaps but I still think it would take them to be programed to kill us. The pieces fitted well together for a collab and it seemed somewhat harmonized.

My only disappointment was the rating. This would never pass TV-G, or TV-7 its definitely a TV-PG or higher. There were more than one implied death scenes of human lives.

On the other hand it was action packed. The only downfall was there was not really a clear plot but hey its a collab what should I expect.

[Richness of Expression]

A nice effect

It was a nice effect but its the same technique used to make people seem like ghosts popping in and out. It made the effect seem more erie than anything else. I liked its artistic feel but it does not make it a movie but a quick demonstration of your skills. Try to make it go somewhere.

[Bozophilia]

Sad but sincere

You really developed you clown character well. A clown without dignity and not very successful learns to be happy with the mere small things in life. I only wish the mime knew he was so niave to the woman with the clown fettish. This reminds me of the CSI episode except he does not get killed.

Its really hard to create a vivid character without sound but you have done it artisitically. Great work and worth the time and effort.