An adult short story with children's book appeal
I like the drawings and I loved the page appeal. The coloring was so well planned and worked so well with the story. I love the modern elements of internet jargon throughout the piece. It just helped to mark this piece as a modern element of internet culture rather than just a great element of storytelling.
I will say that it is not simple to figure the gui out. I opened and re-opened multiple times. Try to fix this style to be more logical for any user to manipulate without much reading of the instructions.
It is an excellent piece full of really beautiful mastery of storytelling and flash innovative techniques.