TonioMiguel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dr Steel's Fibonacci Seq]

All this over the procreation of rabbits

This piece was both fun and entertaining. It always makes me laugh when I see people use Fibonacci's number which is the formula to find out after a certain time period how many offspring will a set of 2 rabbits have. This includes their offspring having rabbits too.

I loved your play on cut and paste it offered a nice effect. This is truly a piece of comic genius.

starkravenmadd responds:

Actually it is not just about rabbits. Fibonacci just used rabbits as an example of the exponentiality of the numbers. In fact I was going to use robotic bunnies to illistrate this point but had to scrap the idea at the last minute. Thanks for the view!

[Takabus]

Fix the rating pronto

Hey, I will admit your artwork is prime but don't be an idiot and rate this suitable for all audiences. This is a mature piece. The F-bomb is readily used in the first piece. There is also a high quantity of adult situations.

The plot seems almost vacant but your animation is really smooth and runs well. Fix the rating because you are just not being fair to our younger users.

Mouflon responds:

Oh yes you're right. Thanks for pointing that out. I forgot to change them back after my first try of uploading this failed. Thanks for the review

[Drawing w/ Bill Hundle 2]

Adult humor...it never gets old

I loved your control of the line. Now did you do that totally frame by frame or did you include tweening? I am trying to master the animation in flash but still find it a little daunting.

Bill-Hundle responds:

It was done all frame-by-frame. I drew the whole picture, then i would erase just a little bit each frame. Then when I was done, I selected all the frames and reversed them. So the finished product starts from nothing and draws a picture.

[Jake]

Nice FBF

This may have not been a great short but it was a very inspiring one. FBF is a difficult task and making it seem real like you did is tedious and annoying work; yet, one hundred percent worth it.

I felt the dog was really interested in the ball. The interaction was not perfect but I can tell this was not just a simple animation.

Renegade-Hamster responds:

Thanks a lot for the review. This is a rotoscoped toon, though. That means I traced every frame of a video that I had of my dog. It was still very time-consuming, but not as hard as it would have been had I created it from scratch.

[.:Kung Fu:.]

Spritastically original

This piece may have seemed long but it was incredible to see your integration of fighting and music. Most of us would expect to see the same old kung fu but you gave us more. My only suggestion would be to add some cinematics to add to the dialog like in the Ninja Gaiden series. Your story was tight and the fight had a strong beat to the rythmn.

DannyP responds:

I'm surprised so many people found this original... most people, from what I've seen, find sprite usage to be unoriginal. Thanks for reviewing.

[Lemming & Pals 4]

1 lemming 2 lemming 3 lemming 4!

I have to admit I was not a big fan of the lemmings but your style has begun to grow on me. I liked the fact that this actually had a plot and was not just simply pointless. You have kept consistent with lemming voices and movement style which helps to build upon your own style and originality.

This was a pleasure to watch just how zaney these lemmings were going after a legendary advisery.

fadedshadow responds:

That sounds to me like an approval for Lemming & Pals 5

[Accidental Emperor Reel 1]

Somthing new and entertaining

I did genuinely like this piece but it still could use some work. Lipsync needs some major overhaul. If this were originally in another language I could understand but a mouth moving when noting is said just does not work.

The jokes and humor were pretty good; yet, the humor because of the elevator sex joke makes it a more Teen and not suitable for all people. Make sure you think about all the elements before rating it for everybody.

Eggie-Alex responds:

Gah! Honestly, it's just a crease in his trouser fabric.
I don't see why you need to jump to conclusions like that!

...filthy child!